Media blog 2- Mr Bush Julia

My TV crime drama will be called 'Family Lines'. It will appear on Netflix and ITV Hub as Netflix is an extremely popular streaming service among young people and ITV Hub  as my crime drama will be set in the UK and ITV is a popular broadcaster and streaming service among the UK audience.   My three minute extract will appear in the final episode during the middle of the episode. Overall, my crime drama will focus on Taylor Smith uncovering her mothers mysterious and secretive past and learning more and more about her and realising her mother isn't who she thought she was as she learns her mother killed another human.  My TV crime drama plans to meet the brief as it will include more than 2 filming locations  (Taylor's room, an empty garage where the murder scene happens, park setting where Taylor finds the camera (evidence) dug up next to a tree), it will contain identifiable  narrative  features such as Todorov's equilibrium theory where a disequilibrium will

1) Type up your teacher's feedback   in full  plus a summary of the comments you received from other students in the class. WWW:  *Very good opening shot- use of close-up * Soundtrack- atmosphere *Good performances-non verbal *Editing- good pace *Zoom in at end on photo *Water in glass- recurring itself- different angles *POV shots *Match-on-action editing 2) Using a combination of your own reflection on the preliminary exercise and the feedback you were given, write  three  WWW bullet points and  three  EBI bullet points for your work. WWW:  *  Good use of  non-diegetic music * Good use of camera shots & angles * Good editing- right pace and use of match-on-action EBI:  * Add dialogue to production as this was part of the brief yet I have not included it.  3) How effectively did you complete the objective you laid out in your mini preliminary exercise  statement of intent ? I completed the objective that I laid out in my statement of intent in my mini preliminary exercise by:

1) Script   INT. EMPTY GARAGE James sits tied to a chair whilst Inez silhouette enters the garage.   James What do you want from me? Inez slides a photo of Betty onto the table. Inez   I know you killed her. James You heard the police, it wasn't me she killed herself. Inez Stop lying to me James, I know you did it, you think I didn't see how you treated her. How you became bored of her,left her out in the dark like she was nothing. James Listen, just because it didn't work out between us doesn't mean I would kill her, I didn't do it, I swear. She probably went crazy after our breakup being the mad woman that she was.  James starts coughing up due to drinking water that's been poisoned.  Inez Oh no, I apologise if tap water isn't your cup of tea. James You…… psycho…… Inez I'm a what, sorry could you say that again I couldn't hear you the first time. James You're…… a…… Inez Someone can't get their words out, it's okay James, sweet dreams i